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~ArcaneRaven
Rafael Valerio Adonai Sarmaat
Artist | Student | Digital Art
Netherlands
I am insane... the pleasent version of insanity, but still insane. I may look calm on the outside, but on the inside it's a turmoil of madness that claws and scratches the bars with which I keep it inprissoned.

"Our knowledge has made us cynical. Our cleverness, hard and unkind. We think too much and feel too little. More than machinery we need humanity. More than cleverness we need kindness and gentleness. Without these qualities, life will be violent and all will be lost." - Charlie Chaplin in 'The Great Dictator'
Goodday,

Currently I'm looking for someone that enjoys reading English and would like to take
a gander at the current flow of my book. You can take your time with reading and
throwing back some constructive feedback.

It's an urban-fantasy and does have a little gore here and there.

A small sample of my writing style:

"   Ricky regained concious, slowly. She noticed the beeping in her ears, muffling the sounds of
her surroundings. Her vision was blurry but she could make out a shimmering light coming from
somewhere, up there, ahead. As she moved her hand to her face she felt small objects slipping
through her fingers. They made a rinkling sound as if it were coins.
  Only now she noticed she was lying on her back and she tried her best to lift her torso up.
She succeeded but had to grab her head in agonny. Whatever these things were, she was
apparently half burried in them.
  Ricky blinked a few times to adjust her sight. They were bullet shells. Thousands of them, in
piles in every direction she looked. As her eyes addapted more to the darkness she could make
out this was a cellar. She found the stair, littlered with bullet shells and three human bodies.
They had no sign of life from this distance. Nor did the other seven bodies she saw around her.
To her left she saw, what appeared to look like, the bottom-half of a human statue. Another
one to her far right, but only headless.
  With much effort she managed to get up on one knee and one foot. She was nakid, apparently.
A chill ran over her spine when she noticed a bone sticking out the top of the human statue to her
left, placing the retouricle question if it has always been a statue."



TL;DR: I need test-readers!
Note me an email adres if interested
  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: Queen of the Stone Age <3
  • Reading: ur mind... oh so dirty~
  • Watching: my drawings
  • Playing: WITH MY..... pencil? :>
  • Eating: fud
  • Drinking: tea

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:iconh0n3yd011:
~h0n3yd011 Feb 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you for the watch c:
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:iconarcaneraven:
~ArcaneRaven Feb 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! You're an awesome person :) beautifull and very tallented. I've kept an eye on your old gallery for long :D.

Happy Birthday btw!
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:iconh0n3yd011:
~h0n3yd011 Feb 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
awh, thank you ; u;
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:iconarcaneraven:
~ArcaneRaven Feb 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome babes :heart: stay sexy and awesome.
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~Thisisromy Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
heyyy dankjewel! ^^ xxxxxx
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~ArcaneRaven Jan 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hoi hoi, graag gedaan! Alles goed waar jij bent? :D
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~MaryMODIFIED Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thanks for the watch Nederlandertje! ;)
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:iconarcaneraven:
~ArcaneRaven Oct 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haha graag gedaan meiske. You're at the next Elf Fantasy Fair perhaps?
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~MaryMODIFIED Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Eerlijk is eerlijk; ben nog nooit naar de EFF geweest ;)
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~ArcaneRaven Oct 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Mooi! Kan ik jou eens meenemen en introduceren daar. Het is eigenlijk een beetje 'site-seeing' bij andere mensen die cosplayen/outfits dragen. 10.000 bezoekers op de drukste van de 3 dagen. Vorig jaar nog wat heeeeele gave outfits gezien.
Khoop nog een leuke Halloween event te vinden met dress-up code :meow:
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